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[Good Shepherd Logo]

kinda choppy

Its a nice logo, but the animation which makes it is kind of choppy, and blurry at the start, which you might want to improve on.

Tamasan responds:

I used jpg file saving to try to use the clor loss to my advantage buut now I have photoshop so I guess it was a bad idea. You are the only one who has commented on the actual design of the logo so far. Thank you for the advice.

[Join The Army!]

Pretty good

Very nice, kinda funny and the interactivity was nice, but i think you could of made it longer, although saying that, it was made for your interactive media unit, so i guess it wasnt made solely for entertainment, so thats excusable. It ends kind of abruptly.
Nice flash though : )

Jimp responds:

Thanks for the review dude! Yeah i guess it could have been longer and the ending was a bit... Made up an hour and a half ago, but I got bored and should still hopefully get a good grade!

[ludas animans Ep. 8]

hmmm slow...

There was way too much text to read at the start, and i found myself holding space to just skip it all... Action wasnt worth the wait so i just didnt watch past the first goblin fight ( i mean the big one, not just the one with one goblin). Give something to make the viewer want to watch on, such as more action.

KNanakase responds:

I guess you haven't watched from the beginning of the series, but action isn't a high priority for me. I just want to tell a story, and there is only action in the series when it actually has something to tell. Plus, more action means even longer wait times between episodes because action scenes aren't my forte. It takes me forever to even think of what to show in the action scenes and even longer to animate them.

[Life Makes You Smile]

nice message

Nice message, not bad. But no particular animation, would be better with animation and a voice over. But if that takes away the feel. then you could time it. I didnt particularly like having to click every time one bit finished, just to start the next bit.

[Outlaw pt.1]

This is amazing

Definetly deserving of frontpage. The animation is of awesome quality, the storyline has depth and an interesting twist. The music chosen suited the movie very well.
I specially liked the parts where Brooks uses the new demon powered gun, very nice animation. Has great potential for a great series and i cant wait for the next part :D. Also the extras were very nice.

P.S thanks for the tips on animating.

[Xefijh: part 3]

strange

Quite strange, but not bad. Hallucinating scene was ok. Could of been funnier and longer. Animation wasnt bad, but it wasnt the best.

[OMG!]

why?

I take it the mark of boredom does weird things to people, pointless animation.
Music didnt add any humour too it either.

[A Nice Hot Cup]

its ok

Its ok, the joke was kinda funny, music was ok. Drawings were very good, only bad things are that it was kind of short, but i suppose it was ment to be, and the voices were a little out of sync.

[Madness Neurosis Collab 3]

pretty nice

I feel it got better as it went on, but in a few of them it could be improved and some of them didnt have gun shot sounds. Such as when the grapple hook thing went through the guys face, would of been better if it had of been animated instead of a red screen to reveal it. I liked the angry face one and the one after that funny and good animation. Nice collab :)

LittleLuckyLink responds:

thanks and glad you enjoyed

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 203]

it was ok.

Nice start, specially the music. And decent edits on hitler, but you could animate the hitler bit to make it better as said before.

(what is the song at the beggining?)

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

'Stupid MF' by Mindless Self Indulgence.